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JUNE 2003 ROUND A





FOR:
K.Mai's 54s In Red

PRINCE OF DOMINO

CHARACTER: Zeroun Arisann Mayire (boss with long hair)

COMMENTS: Haha, you won't believe how hard it was to choose a character~
For the last round, K.Mai[-sama] drew Fio and Hye for me~~ (It's really
really pretty!!) And I get to draw for her this round...ah, too bad my
my art cannot begin to compare.
...Because 54s in Red is an anime satire-thing, this is my anime
ripoff. >> Just because I had fun reading Tennis no Ouji-sama
(Prince of Tennis). Yes, Zeroun's holding a domino...haha, I dunno.
I guess it's because he was trying to cover his room w/dominoes~

BAD ART-ness: I'm sorry it turned out so bad. ;-; My shading is
all over the place, and there really isn't lighting...and the
domino in the bg is kinda funky (and lopsided, and ugly).
(it was a good idea at the time.) The erasing around Zerouns's
body is really really stupid and ugly too...it changed lengths
in the most random places! And I really need to work on my
proportions too (esp. my too broad shoulders, the bad bad hands,
the bad arm angle and diff. lengths, the too long torso, oddly shaped
legs, insanely big feet, etc.). The BG feels kinda empty too. His face
is funky-fied too, and the shading on the button sucks. I really need
to stop my black pen shadowing over the line art. And I need to draw
better clothing folds...they really suck, especially in this pic.
One leg is insanely skinnier than the other too. ;-; ......
his face is too fat! And the domino in his badly drawn hand is
bending, and too small in length!
(Oh yeah...his leg runs off the page. That's actually because I like
having people's random body parts run off the page. ^^;;; even though
other people don't really like it that much.)

~Effey




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